You said "boughs of jolly" instead of "boughs of holly." ZERO STARS.
Just kidding, although the rating I'm actually giving it isn't much better. I agree with you, but it's still a pretty short loop with below average animation. You've greatly improved. Watching this loop over and over to write this review gets pretty annoying.
Still, I don't think this is 1 and a Half stars bad. This is only really good to show how far you've come as an animator.
(Recommended by a friend)
I've seen stuff you've made and you seem about 12 or so, which is really surprising considering how high quality your animation is. This is a little choppier than some of your other work, but it's really great. It's basic, but classic. It's a bit like every other Newgrounds cartoon, but in the best way/
Were you inspired by GradeAUnderA? Maybe it's just the accent but your shows seem similar.
Your writing is pretty funny, but you could improve it by speaking faster and voicing more emotion.
I was slightly and ill keep that in mind thanks man
The police officer honestly sounded more like Cosby.
It's alright. Animation is pretty acceptable. I'd like to see what else you've done.
The best comment you can get! Thanks!
Better than I can do.
That's the kinda stuff I look for when I'm on Newgrounds.
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